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Daddy!America X Playful!Child!Reader X Mommy!England: Mr. Tickle Monster


 


You quietly exited your room as you overheard your parents talking.


"Alfred love, can you chop wood for the winter's fires," Arthur asked.


It was fall, but the family loved to gather around the fire and watch a good Disney movie a lot, so, as a result, Alfred was required to chop a lot of wood.


You peeked around the wall blocking the hallway from the kitchen, where your parents, Alfred and Arthur, were talking.


Alfred stood up from his chair. "Of course I can," Alfred said, catching a glance at you.


As he looked at you, you came out from behind the wall, 'flying' on the ground like an airplane, moving your arms up and down opposite of each other, running straight into Alfred, bear hugging his legs and laughing.


Alfred laughed along and picked you up.


Your actions even got a chuckle from Arthur as he watched the other members of his family bond.


Alfred turned you upside-down, making sure your pink shirt wouldn't fly down with you. "Tickle monster!" He called out, using his left hand to tickle your stomach and neck.


You bent wherever the Tickle Monster was tickling you. "No! No! Bad tickle monster!"


"The tickle monster isn't bad. He just wants to have some fun." Alfred removed his hand from your stomach and put his hand within your view, personifying it as sad by having the fingers look down.


You couldn't help but feel sad for the Tickle Monster. "No~. Don't be sad Mr. Tickle Monster! I'm sorry!" You reached out for Alfred's hand. It was just barely out of reach, to your displeasure.


Alfred helped you into the upright position, having the Tickle Monster arms-length away from you.


You reached out and grabbed Alfred's hand, kissing his knuckles and smiling. Then you looked over your other smiling parent and held out Alfred's hand. "Mommy, the Tickle Monster wants a kiss from you too!"


Arthur looked up at Alfred, who nodded in agreement, opening and closing his hands and making a "mwah" sound as his hand did the actions.


Arthur smiled. "I suppose it wouldn't hurt." He walked up to the two of you and kissed Alfred's hand where you had.


"You can't do that, silly Mommy," you said with a smile. "That's where I kissed Mr. Tickle Monster." You kissed the spot again, re-claiming the spot as yours.


"Okay." Arthur said. "What if I kiss Mr. Tickle Monster... Here?" Arthur pointed to spot where his apparent left eye was.


"No! You just poked his eye~!" You cried. You took a gentle hold of Alfred's hand and pointed inbetween his supposive eyes. "You can kiss him here," you pointed to the spot where the middle and ring finger meet on the knuckle above the fingernail (It's long I know, but I don't know any other way to describe it! >.<), "or here."


I'll take this one." Arthur pointed to the second spot and kissed it lightly.


You smiled and threw your hands up in the air. "Yay! Mr. Tickle Monster is happy again! Right?" You faced Alfred's hand and tilted your head, petting his knuckles and the back if his hand.


Alfred faced his hand towards you and nodded it, smiling.


"Yay! We did it Mommy!" You gave out a large grin and laughed.


Alfred and Arthur laughed along.


"Yes we did love." Arthur kissed your head.


"We love you Mr. Tickle Monster!" You chuckled again as the Tickle Monster reappeared.


"Aww~. Mr. Tickle Monster loves you too, __________," Alfred said as you brought Alfreds hand into a tight hug against your chest like you would your favorite teddy bear.


 


The End of this Major Fluff Story!

I'm sorry if the spacing is all weird or there is no spacing, this was copied and pasted off of my gmail and was attempted to fix on Sta.sh, but I gave up.

This originally was a contest entry for one of the groups I'm in, but I couldn't restist turning it into a fluff story instead >.< It was so cute~!

Anyways, I wrote this as I was on my way to Oregon on my phone, and I had been in the car for like 8 hours before, plus this was really just for fun, so I really wasn't careul about sentence structure or anything like that. But I did look it over 4 times before submitting it... I should be good :D

Anyways, I'm going to fall behind my schedule so bad, I have a stupid case of Writer's Block and I can't figure out how to get rid of it. :cry:

Now for credits~!

Hetalia + Characters: Himaruya
You: You
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Burning-Sapphire Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Photographer
My gosh..... -points to comments below-


But yes, amazing story!! ; v ;
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THAT IS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FANFIC Quality time emoticon 
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BUT WAIT THERES MORE Bowser is talking 


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OMG OMG ONOZ Emoticon Spaz attack Oh My Gawd :wall of text: :iconohyoublushplz: :superSayain: 
Bravo to you sir, bravo!

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Emgoldey Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable~! My heart melted due to the fluffiness!
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pluswolf2 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
there should be more of these I love this so much!!! (I'm crying right now it was so good!! T^T)
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izzethecat Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i called my grandpa the tickle monster XD he tickles me alot >3< ( 14 btw )
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AllAboardTheSSDerp Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWVincentYayzPLZ 
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DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW
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animelovea Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Writer
:D Thank you!
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JJflipflop01 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
SOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you >//<
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JJflipflop01 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Welcome. :)
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MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
This story so sweet!
Soooooooo, they're gay?
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animelovea Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!

>.> <.< yes.
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Mhmm. That's good! We should make everyone feel comfortable if they're gay or not (I'm NOT gay)!!!!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
What? That'snotwhatImeantImeantthatAmericaandEnhlandaregay...
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
So what r u saying then?
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animelovea Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
That America and England were gay, they loved each other, they had sex, and created the reader (MPreg XD). Or you could say they adopted reader... either way, America and England were gay and loved each other ;)
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist
Okay. Thought so.
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Deidara-Brat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*drowns in the fluff* XuX
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gremilnsinthecrypt Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student General Artist
SO FLUFFY!!!!!!I LOVE THIS
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SecretlySpain Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013   Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *le gasp* Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww SO CUTE!!!! >/w/<
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KM6 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
aw! this was absolutely adorable!
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PastaCakeVe Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just melted from the cuteness xD
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ShadowCaster-635 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS WAS SO CUTE!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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ShadowCaster-635 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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chibi-chocolate123 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
oh god. too beautiful.
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
:iconblushplz: Thank you! But I wouldn't call it beautiful...
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you need help with writers block you can ask me for ideas. I am always here to help. Keep up the good work!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
It's not so much that I don't have any ideas, just that I don't know how to apply my thoughts to the paper...

But thanks. I will come to you. :)

Thanks again!
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Np! And ik that feeling.
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol cute! I love it!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Np!
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*listen to music and think of what character from Hetalia they remind you of... Then keep listening to it and let it play out as a story in your head and write how it plays out*
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
I have plenty of ideas, it's just that I can't figure out how to weave them to my stories.

But I will try that next time I can't think of anything. Thank you!
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You're welcome... Glad I could help in some way.
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Emarel-fae Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
cute!
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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mcshootingstar Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats so cute -spasms-
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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Nibblez22 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's so cute~
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animelovea Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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Nibblez22 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~ (I'm only like a fourth so... I'm a mutt!))
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ArtisticallyLiterate Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Aw...This was so cute! You did an amazing job.
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